November 14
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Hello, I went the university's festival last week. I sold the ramen and yakisoba there. It was very popular shops. So many people came this shop. I played soccer. I got two points. It was very interesting. Thank you.
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Hello, I went to the university festival last week. I sold ramen and yakisoba there. It was a very popular shop. So many people came to this shop. I played soccer. I got two goals. It was very interesting. Thank you.
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